All Comments on 'Love Bites'

by JukeboxEMCSA

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
You Are Getting Sleepy

Not because of the lesbian topic but the way the story was turned and how the sex was handled. This seems unique and well thought so please keep up the good work.

hanna_ahanna_aabout 13 years ago
Very funny ...

I liked the story very much. Very good sense of humour how tables are turned ... However, you might rather sign stories that are each other's sequels as multi-chapter. I read "once bitten twice shy" first ... and half of the fun as well as that story's understanding was spoilt.

But that's only a blame of the way of how it was edited, I don't have the least objections against either of both stories. They are both extremely intelligent and ironic about the hypnotisizing stuff.

There is no third chapter of Jane and Darla's adventures, is there?

hanna_ahanna_aabout 13 years ago
very funny ...

I liked the story very much. Very good sense of humour how tables are turned ... However, you might rather sign stories that are each other's sequels as multi-chapter. I read "once bitten twice shy" first ... and half of the fun as well as that story's understanding was spoilt.

But that's only a blame of the way of how it was edited, I don't have the least objections against either of both stories. They are both extremely intelligent and ironic about the hypnotisizing stuff.

There is no third chapter of Jane and Darla's adventures, is there?

Archangel_MArchangel_Mover 12 years ago
Adorable!

I love how you captured the attitude of the average VTM LARPer perfectly, and I absolutely adore the little story you've created! Please consider writing about the girls' time in Jane's hotel room! :)

JukeboxEMCSAJukeboxEMCSAover 12 years agoAuthor
Jane's Hotel Room

Actually, the story "Once Bitten, Twice Shy" tells exactly what happens in Jane's hotel room!

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