All Comments on 'Vacation For Firsts'

by Darksider

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
twin sisters

great story i was lucky enough to see my to sisters in a 69

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Re-read your story.

Good story, but my advice is to change the names as you go, instead of using the program to alter them afterward. (At one point Mandy makes a "dBrandy" for the bed, she also searches for "cBrandy" to tip Jeff with). Alter it before "Brandy" gets you in trouble friend. Then del this comment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Steamy...

That was hot and sexy! Can't wait to read more! ;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Badly written

Badly written had to stop use an editor

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