All Comments on 'In More Ways Than One'

You have to continue this story its really good

I think you should get an editor if you want to maximize your potential, but this is worth five stars from me, as is. It's an impressive first effort.

Can't wait for the next part of the story.

Kept whipping between first and third person POV, way long paragraphs, and generally muddy writing.

Definitely needs a good editor if this is to become anything.

this is so good! I was absorbed in it so much, i need to read more..hot characters!!!

needs a tiny bit of work but i enjoyed it very much

Only a little bit of a let down at the end but, good story 4 stars

I really do. It was a good story, a bit jumbled, but a good story nonetheless.

cant wait for more

I'm confused....who got played??????????? Why the fuck is

it always about the dude and what the hell he thinks?

Somebody clarify this for me. She was in LOVE with him!!

What didn't he get. She gave the gift of herself. Men can be

such numbnutz...........whatever!!! Let's not play my girl like that....please!!!!