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I have to believe that this piece of prose captures the delights of every truly sexual person . . . male or female. It has a great flow to it, and the sporadic use of the "lustier" sexual terms kicks up the juices another notch. There's the sense that this comes from from within, and the fact that I have some knowledge of the writer probably affected my personal response to her wants and what I want to give in return. Heart

THAT WAS ONE OF THE HOTTEST POEMS I HAVE EVER READ IN MY LIFE

I already have it.

Rich with both love and lust.