All Comments on 'Searching for Sheila Ch. 02'

I don't understand why he gives a rat's ass where she is!

A little mistake in how he approached the factory, confused over where he actually parked the truck and walked. The man sneaking up behind him is kind of a cliche, but you did say you wanted to emulate the old pulp fiction style. Obviously the man behind him knows who he is, so maybe Pharoh has connections that go well out of town?

great story waiting for next chapter

Keep them coming this is becoming a great read!!!

Thiss story looks good so far. I hope for the main characters sake that he dumps his wife Shiela for good and Maybe starts a good relationship with Angel.

beware ... your story has great promise .. please don't make us wait!

Just like the old pulp fiction, characters hard as rocks. It is difficult to feel anything for them...

He found his wife, who is now a whore. Now what?

the issue is we do not know WHY she strayed. At some point in their marriage the wife DECIDED to fuck around. It doesnt seem like Tobe is bad in bed..or at least so bad that she could not stand to have sex with him.

so that means she decided to fucked around. Like...on Purpose ya know?

the fact that she is no longer her own person maybe true but the Husband seems unable to figure out what the wife's ACTIONS actually MEAN ...

Thanks for the offering.

I haven't read many of them, but I always enjoy the LW/thriller combo. I read the 1st ch. some time ago. I don't know why I stopped. I don't plan to stop this time.