All Comments on 'Body Swap'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
pathetic

it was a pathetic piece

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Very good.

I enjoyed reading this story, it is different but still very enjoyable.

LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleabout 13 years ago
Interesting premise

I just wish there wer more details of the love making. That's just me, the voyeur, though.

The idea of cross-coupling the video is fascinating.

darkcage71darkcage71over 9 years ago
Nice Job

I liked the interesting way the story brought recent VR technology into the fold. I also liked that there was a sweet undertone to everything.

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