All Comments on 'Au Pair Tops a Full House'
by AmazingGrayce
- 19 Comments
Anonymousabout 13 years agoBased on what little of this story I could wade through, you should have stayed in school.
Anonymousabout 13 years agoNice start! Loved the youth. Loved the cumming on her tits. Loved the Bi. Loved the fucking. Keep writing. Oh yes, loved the Bio pic!
Anonymousabout 13 years agoNice start! Loved the youth. Loved the cumming on her tits. Loved the Bi. Loved the fucking. Keep writing. Oh yes, loved the Bio pic!
estragonabout 13 years agotheir comments merely prove the extent of their morals and intelligence (or lack thereof). Good and hot. Our au pair has quite a pair, and the rest of her isn't too shabby either. Plot is not original, but the writing is hot, and the narrator has enough vraisemblance to be going on with. Good effort. By the way, good proofreading; very few quibbling materials here, which is great.
Anonymousabout 13 years agoI liked the story. Sweet. Oh and agree with other comments about the bio pic... It's intriguing
NellaBarely2about 13 years agoThis is a nice story setup for a live-in "helper" and now playmate. I'm not up on Helpers but thought they were generally child caregivers. I'm not a prude, but thanks for not getting them involved. From my perspective, there's no place for child abuse anywhere. That's not to say kids don't play while growing up. There's a lot of room for more hot scenes with this group ... And friends. Would love to read more details of their pleasures ... to longer air travel time.
Anonymousabout 13 years agoHi, can't believe that was your first story - sure hope it won't be your last. Quick action, believable and flowing. Had to take a look at this pic everyone was commenting on - not shabby at all. What else do you have in mind for us girl? Unleash it ...
Anonymousabout 13 years agoNo, don't mind the morons who don't like people having their own opinion.
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You like it? Fine. Others don't like it? Fine.
CeliaisAlienaabout 13 years agoVery sexy and sensual. Fast-paced erotica can be much harder to pull off than it looks, and this story whips up quite a frenzy of excitement with no lag!
I do like the set-up, and our narrator's personality comes through vividly. The couple and the trainer are of course relatively skeletal, but I like what the story communicates about them, and it's a lovely touch that the au pair's presence serves as a catalyst to bring them all much closer together (and in such a sexy way!).
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