All Comments on 'Better Late'

I've got a pregnant lady giving birth in the story I'm working on, one of my technical editors gave me a page of technical corrections (thank you, Yes_Please), and I'm glad somebody else went first with a childbirth story. And it's believable; our first was a week late.

Different outlook being more gay than heterosexual, I found I wanted children while the pregnancies were hard the result was where I was after. Now so long ago, from the first day after I proposed he was my submissive which was admired especially by my mother. Well written but loving an inferior male that is stretching the truth a lot isn't it.

L.O.L Janice

I liked the flow of this story and the "stream of consciousness" feel to it. It seemed the ending was rather abrupt. I felt the need for a different resolution. I know the feeling of "Will this never be done?" My first was 3 weeks late, and my wife never went into labor with the other two either...induced for all three.