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by Anonymous

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by twelveoone02/22/11

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nice twist, but otherwise too straight though
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by fridayam02/22/11

Yes

I liked this, saw the situation, knew the characters. A good short novel compressed into a few lines. Lovely.

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by UnderYourSpell02/22/11

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that is so sad but I do find the second stanza to be more prose than the first

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by tigerjen02/22/11

First stanza was the best part for me.....second stanza I felt didn't really fit with the first stanza......

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by Tristesse202/23/11

You do......

.......these "slice of life" poems so well. Lovely images.

Tess

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