All Comments on 'Colors'

by 66stingray

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Good Work

Clever and just the right amount of tension. Leaving us hanging the way you did was erotic. Good first effort, and next time, try for a little more character development. And why can't someone write off their bar bill?

reader018reader018over 12 years ago
please add more

this is a good start for a two or three part story series!

would love to read more of this story!!!

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