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by tigerjen03/01/11

Well done :)

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by NeonSubtlety03/02/11

Beautiful

The rhythm and swoon of the word choice is just great. And some of the metaphor brings a smile to my face because of how unique the comparisons are. Great job. I'll look for more of your stuff.

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