waiting for part 2
Reads like a ten year-old wrote it.
.......and say a 12-year old wrote this. His Mum wouldn't have to be innocent she'd have to be retarded to not know what was going on.
good story, can't wait for pt. 2!
Well, the 12 yr old readers seem to be enjoying it.
... that Literotica doesn't give us the option of rating stories with a zero?
This has GOT to be the most pathetic excuse for a story that I've ever seen, on this site!
I wouldnt mind compairing the stories the anonymous commenters have writen with this story to get an idea of their skill level.
... published a story, but that doesn't mean I don't enjoy reading a well written one. This is not a well written story. Sorry, but it's not!
running in the hackneyed cliche category:
porn star looks mom? check.
34DD tits? check.
son with 10" "snake"? check.
"gallon of cum"? check.
I don't know know why he would compare your story with SamuelX crap. Yours is better.
waiting for part 2!
but I liked it...keep writing!
But I did enjoy myself ...err... the story I mean. :)
The honey licking was original I guess, but honestly this entire story could have been 100% better. You know how? Make the son naughty but innocent and tell it from the mothers perspective with intent to "corrupt" her son. Maybe the honey was not an accident? Maybe the entire thing was purposeful?
I know that would have entailed more build up, but its just an idea! Don't forget to look at your idea from more viewpoints before you finalize it!
Mom is nieve of what her son thinks of her. She doesn't realize that he thinks she is a sexy hot milf and wants to fuck her.
That's what is so kinky.
I hope to read that he gives her one good fucking and has her wondering why she hasn't fucked him sooner, and wanting him back inside her as much as possible.
Thanks for the great story.
come up with part 2 quick!
along the lines of mom-son incest stories, this is definitely a breathe of fresh air! keep it going!
tks for the story.
Those who says its unrealistic, whats the point !
Awesome how the situation unfolds without anyone actually planning for it, sort of an "accidental BJ"! Would be nice to see some accidental/unplanned deepthroat also.
upload part 2 soon!!!
can't wait for part 2!
Nice job. Try to make part two longer, but I cant wait.
Please write a second and third .....etc part .... soon!!!
Like your story very much
pls up other parts soon!
I don't know if you remember but you commented on one of my stories awhile ago. And that story that you commented on (Growing anticipation) was inspired by your story Morning Mom which I think should be considered a classic. I was so happy to see that you had written something else. I don't know what it is about the obliviousness of the mom, but for some reason that makes the story so much better. I was also really glad to see that you weren't afraid to make the son very well endowed. When the dad saw what was going on and just passed it off as innocent my mind was blown. I mean how could a mom not think she was turning her son on if he's dripping precum???
Amazing. Loved it. More more more!!!
Great story. Please upload part 2 soon
Ahhhh, a honey of a story and a new angle of telling it.
Very nice, but unbelievable. Hehehehehe.
Ch. 2 of this amazing story can be found on
New chapter is even hooter... you're a brilliant writer man
Me and my boyfriend role played your story...sleeping bag from chapter 2 was exceptionally hot, did mom cum, how did it continue?
Write more mom son stories baby boy...
I thought while at lake in honey camping 3 mom could get a call from sister that dad is cheating with some blond. Mom then later finds out she is pregnant to son and moves in with sister and continues her love affair with her son and now her younger sister too..
It's a little too sticky for me. And how can such smart people be so dumb.It was a simple story to read...............LAROC OF AGES
That should have been the title. I don't think there was a romance per se, just a short affair. He's 60!!..that's why he's not jumping her.
all of you who were rude and didn't like it- FUCK OFF!
LOADEDGUN - YOU'RE GREAT - EROTIC AND NOVEL - I'VE READ 1000 STORIES HERE AND YOU'RE ONE OF THE BEST - KEEP IT UP AND WRITE.
PLEASE GIVE YOUR HEROINES' LOVELY BREASTS, NIPPLES AND CUNTLIPS MUCH MORE DESCRIPTION - DON'T QUIT AND WRITE MORE - LOTS OF PEOPLE LOVE YOUR WORK THO THEY WON'T ADMIT IT. KEEP IT UP.
Nice story but of course not written by loadedgun.
Sounds like dad's a real low watt bulb, but I can suspend reality enough to say I enjoyed this story.
That story had me
Literally laughing out loud. The fact that the son is the only one in touch with reality.
The bees, the oddly naive pornstar-built mom, the dad wandering aimlessly in the
Woods. The saliva bath. So funny. I was trying to picture who to cast in this scene
If it was a movie. Sophia Vargarra as the mom, Kelsey Grammer as the dad and Michael Cerra as the son. Hilarious.
This story got me so horny and worked up i absolutely love it. Please write some more chapters on this it is phenominal.
i was not that fortunate in this life.
the story is erotic.
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