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Mom-Son Honey Camping

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by Anonymous

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by timb104403/04/11

part 2

waiting for part 2

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by Anonymous03/04/11

Shite

Reads like a ten year-old wrote it.

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by Anonymous03/04/11

I'll be more generous......

.......and say a 12-year old wrote this. His Mum wouldn't have to be innocent she'd have to be retarded to not know what was going on.

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by Anonymous03/04/11

great

good story, can't wait for pt. 2!

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by Anonymous03/04/11

.

Well, the 12 yr old readers seem to be enjoying it.

HAHAHA!!!

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by Anonymous03/04/11

Isn't it a pity...

... that Literotica doesn't give us the option of rating stories with a zero?

This has GOT to be the most pathetic excuse for a story that I've ever seen, on this site!

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by larry7440303/04/11

Hmm...

I wouldnt mind compairing the stories the anonymous commenters have writen with this story to get an idea of their skill level.

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by mschack6303/04/11

Well I've never...

... published a story, but that doesn't mean I don't enjoy reading a well written one. This is not a well written story. Sorry, but it's not!

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by Anonymous03/04/11

another nomination for the "SamuelX Memorial" worst story of the week award

running in the hackneyed cliche category:

porn star looks mom? check.
34DD tits? check.
son with 10" "snake"? check.
"gallon of cum"? check.

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by toJohnny703/04/11

Much better than SamuelX stories

I don't know know why he would compare your story with SamuelX crap. Yours is better.

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by Anonymous03/04/11

waiting for part 2!

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by Anonymous03/05/11

A little cheezy

but I liked it...keep writing!

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by Anonymous03/05/11

agreed... cheesy!

But I did enjoy myself ...err... the story I mean. :)

The honey licking was original I guess, but honestly this entire story could have been 100% better. You know how? Make the son naughty but innocent and tell it from the mothers perspective with intent to "corrupt" her son. Maybe the honey was not an accident? Maybe the entire thing was purposeful?

I know that would have entailed more build up, but its just an idea! Don't forget to look at your idea from more viewpoints before you finalize it!

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by digdaddyrich03/06/11

I like the storyline

Mom is nieve of what her son thinks of her. She doesn't realize that he thinks she is a sexy hot milf and wants to fuck her.

That's what is so kinky.

I hope to read that he gives her one good fucking and has her wondering why she hasn't fucked him sooner, and wanting him back inside her as much as possible.

Thanks for the great story.

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by Anonymous03/10/11

waiting!!!

come up with part 2 quick!

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by Anonymous03/11/11

this is something new...

along the lines of mom-son incest stories, this is definitely a breathe of fresh air! keep it going!

tks for the story.

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by Anonymous03/12/11

Rating 10/10

Those who says its unrealistic, whats the point !
Awesome how the situation unfolds without anyone actually planning for it, sort of an "accidental BJ"! Would be nice to see some accidental/unplanned deepthroat also.

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by Anonymous03/16/11

PART 2!!!

upload part 2 soon!!!

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by Anonymous03/28/11

nice story

can't wait for part 2!

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by peaceender04/09/11

Nice

Nice job. Try to make part two longer, but I cant wait.

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by Anonymous04/23/11

Please write more parts ...

Please write a second and third .....etc part .... soon!!!

Like your story very much

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by Anonymous04/27/11

part 2 soon!!!

pls up other parts soon!

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by HugeErectson12/31/11

Nothing short of amazing

I don't know if you remember but you commented on one of my stories awhile ago. And that story that you commented on (Growing anticipation) was inspired by your story Morning Mom which I think should be considered a classic. I was so happy to see that you had written something else. I don't know what it is about the obliviousness of the mom, but for some reason that makes the story so much better. I was also really glad to see that you weren't afraid to make the son very well endowed. When the dad saw what was going on and just passed it off as innocent my mind was blown. I mean how could a mom not think she was turning her son on if he's dripping precum???

Amazing. Loved it. More more more!!!

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by FRESH78701/20/12

Great story. Please upload part 2 soon

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by Anonymous04/29/12

A honey of a story.

Ahhhh, a honey of a story and a new angle of telling it.
Very nice, but unbelievable. Hehehehehe.

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by taboo_lover09/04/12

Chapter 2

Ch. 2 of this amazing story can be found on
http://www.lushstories.com/stories/incest/mom-s on-honey-camping-2.aspx
New chapter is even hooter... you're a brilliant writer man

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by Anonymous10/08/12

Hot story

Me and my boyfriend role played your story...sleeping bag from chapter 2 was exceptionally hot, did mom cum, how did it continue?
Write more mom son stories baby boy...

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by Anonymous01/15/13

mom gets pregnant

I thought while at lake in honey camping 3 mom could get a call from sister that dad is cheating with some blond. Mom then later finds out she is pregnant to son and moves in with sister and continues her love affair with her son and now her younger sister too..

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by LAROC02/10/13

This story is well !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It's a little too sticky for me. And how can such smart people be so dumb.It was a simple story to read...............LAROC OF AGES

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by mafia_patriarch10/14/13

Don't cry over spilt honey

That should have been the title. I don't think there was a romance per se, just a short affair. He's 60!!..that's why he's not jumping her.

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by Anonymous10/09/14

good writer

all of you who were rude and didn't like it- FUCK OFF!

LOADEDGUN - YOU'RE GREAT - EROTIC AND NOVEL - I'VE READ 1000 STORIES HERE AND YOU'RE ONE OF THE BEST - KEEP IT UP AND WRITE.
PLEASE GIVE YOUR HEROINES' LOVELY BREASTS, NIPPLES AND CUNTLIPS MUCH MORE DESCRIPTION - DON'T QUIT AND WRITE MORE - LOTS OF PEOPLE LOVE YOUR WORK THO THEY WON'T ADMIT IT. KEEP IT UP.

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by Anonymous11/30/14

Should have given the credit to the original author though!

Nice story but of course not written by loadedgun.

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