by Just Plain Bob
A fast paced smooth flowing story that was fun to read.
Thanks for the entertainment.
Quick and to the point. You have a style of writing that flows well.
JPB - I must be getting soft in the head, because I really liked this story. Just enough revenge on a total dickhead who deserved it and a happy ending all around.
It's funny to see Phil screwing himself over and over. The quote about insanity being "doing something repeatedly and expecting a different result each time". Meanwhile Rob is doing almost nothing to respond to Phil. Phil just ends up the loser. Of course there is the underlying theme that Rob is a nice guy and Phil is an asshole. Rob doesn't have to go after Phil's girls, they come to him. Too funny.
Another Fiver JPB. Some just never know when to quit.
Just an aside, how come when women get pregnant on Lit, it is usually twins? Why not triplets?
all things ended well and happy.
just the way things should in a good read.
5 stars woudl have given you more but... 5 the max.
JPB is all over the place from horrible 1 star stories to 5 star stories such as this one.
I'm agreeing with Dworknob. This was a fun little story that I somehow missed the first time.
But as they say: a stopped clock is right twice a day. So I won't let it get to me.
Very entertaining -- and isn't that what these stories are about? 5 for sure.
Bob, I know that you get a lot of flack. But I enjoy reading your stories whether I like them or not. But this one was very good. Thanks for all your writing. Jim
& we all wish we squashed him back pretty much like this. Just Another JPB cool & cruel noir classic.
Sherry turned out to be a pretty good bet. Thanks JPB; certainly a fiver.
It was a good read, but I have to say that Phil has always been a dumb SOB. His adversary relationship with Rob may have motivated him a lot and let him soar to unforeseen heights, but that certainly didn't make him happy, or a good human for that matter.
The Geo was a perfect lawn ornament for Phil.
Wouldn't want to give him anything that was worth something.
Good story, I like that no idiots benefitted in this story. As usually very easy reading and good flow to the story. Thanks Bob
I don't agree with the commenters on this one. I thought both guys were jerkoffs and the wife turned a revenge fuck into a life. A life that if this tale were continued she would have spread her legs for someone else for one reason or another. No I didn't really care too much for this.
no rating
Good story ruined by a rushed ending. You can and have done much better.
Rushed ending? The wrap up tells you everything you need to know. Do you need all the angst and drama you find in alot of stories?
Not always.
Cheers Bob
After a few of the worst Bob has done, I get one of the really good ones.
What guy would put his wife on the line . I can see putting My ex on the table but not my real wife that I love
Great story!small: : towns. People, goals, focus
On
those things that you excelland play to be membe. Beating one guy is No big deal ! One
Yeah, my wife wouldn’t have left me if I bet her in a poker game. She would have waited until I got to sleep that night, then cut me, balls, dick and all. Gone. And probably laughed about it. My wife really didn’t put up with any BS. Good as gold if you treated her right but screw her over or disrespect her and she could get downright medieval.
Thanks, Bob, very good story, thanks for sharing.
Five stars.
Pabst Blue Ribbon? Really? It must suck to be so poor you have to drink dog piss. 🤢🤮