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Rant #3

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by Anonymous

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by twelveoone03/07/11

YO

FUCK THE MAN!!! Oh wait, I am the man, that is me!!!
Well it has been a while, so 5
so good luck mutha fucker, don't let it happen again
at least for a while
'cause the shit gets older
than the void to be

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by UnderYourSpell03/08/11

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I rather like this oh I could pick holes in all sorts of ways but for a vent all I can say is you go girl!!

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by twelveoone03/12/11

found this,

I think it's your's:
dawn diddy

dawnd on me that ur a pawmpuss arse

This is a great line:

good luck mutha fucker, it's a fitting good bye

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by theognis04/13/11

*****

This is a very interesting poem, as is the other one you've submitted. You used the word 'than' twice in this one when 'then' is what you meant, and there are all kinds of spelling errors in your other poem. Nevertheless, I find both of them exceptional, so this vote is for both, owing to the fact you don't allow voting on your first.

Five.

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by tazz31710/09/11

RANT AND RAVE

CHANGES NOTHING EXCEPT PERSONAL GRATIFICATION, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by tazz31710/16/12

WOULD A NON-VENT

prevent an implosion, TK U MLJ LV NV

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