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YO
FUCK THE MAN!!! Oh wait, I am the man, that is me!!!
Well it has been a while, so 5
so good luck mutha fucker, don't let it happen again
at least for a while
'cause the shit gets older
than the void to be
~
I rather like this oh I could pick holes in all sorts of ways but for a vent all I can say is you go girl!!
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If you don't like me having fun with what is no more than a stupid extended cliche (which I did give you a 5 for) don't post it. It is as simple as that. I am sorry they don't have a special vent category, but until they do, if you want to vent and not submit "poetry" turn both the comments and voting off.
But thank you for the amusement.
Yo, fuck the rant.
found this,
I think it's your's:
dawn diddy
dawnd on me that ur a pawmpuss arse
This is a great line:
good luck mutha fucker, it's a fitting good bye
*****
This is a very interesting poem, as is the other one you've submitted. You used the word 'than' twice in this one when 'then' is what you meant, and there are all kinds of spelling errors in your other poem. Nevertheless, I find both of them exceptional, so this vote is for both, owing to the fact you don't allow voting on your first.
Five.
RANT AND RAVE
CHANGES NOTHING EXCEPT PERSONAL GRATIFICATION, TK U MLJ LV NV
WOULD A NON-VENT
prevent an implosion, TK U MLJ LV NV
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