All Comments on 'A Pregnant Portent'

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vrosej10vrosej10about 13 years agoAuthor
before the first shots are fired...

this is an avant garde experimental kind of thing. a lot of you will hate it and that's fair enough. a few will love it. those who have no clue what it means, I suggest you read the title; it informs the poem.

ps twelve, as I know you are known for hating unusual lay outs, I experimented for a week till I hit on this.

buttersbuttersabout 13 years ago
i want to read this as a dream

the fears/regrets of a pregnancy terminated. the rain is all inside from where i'm looking. i found an old, refreshed darkness in this.

vrosej10vrosej10about 13 years agoAuthor
Go chip!

Got it in one.

theognistheognisabout 13 years ago
*****

Not easily, but a five.

UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellabout 13 years ago
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I've had weird dreams like this too and they leave my empty womb and heart sad for days

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
bleh

anon does not like this one. bore ring, stupid shapes do nothing for poetry. 2

and sum 1 will complain about anon leaving a 2, but they say nothing about anon leaving 5 s and good comments. hippo crits, both the raving hose

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