All Comments on 'Husbands Fantasy Comes True Ch. 02'

I do hope you are planning on adding more chapters to this story. I really enjoyed the first 2 chapters as they seemed to have been torn right from my wife's diary....Keep up the good work!

... by telling them how great a story is, if it isn't . "Adam was to." is a prime example as is "I feel Adams dick...". This is only marginally better than the first chapter because at least the spelling is better, even if the tenses are mixed up and the sentence structure is awkward at best. If the author uses English as a second language then I apologize. Otherwise, maybe you should use the 'Text With Audio" section for your work.

This is a great story, ruined by errors. Spelling, grammar, tense changes all make this tale hard to read. At the very least, you could run a spell-checker. Stop destroying your exciting story by just "pounding it out."

very erotic stories... loved to read them... really wonderful... continue it :)

P.

There were a few errors, but it didn't distract from the story.

I hope that there's going to be a lot more of the weekend by themselves.

Perhaps she will teach her son to be the best lover she has ever had.

Thanks for the read

Krupp it up, thank you.

Excellent follow up to the first chapter, despite minor errors - so what? Keep it up, some more please! xx Ken

Gayle

Gayle

Love your story and that it's told by a woman. I hope in chapter 3 Adam gets his mom pregnant.

Other ideas, perhaps he and his dad will do mom together?

Or dad realizes mom is no longer in love with him and he and Adam trades rooms so mom and her son can sleep together all the time

by a highly talented lady writer. Like so many other ladies, this author is intrigued by the idea of a boy shoving his stiff young prick up between his mother's legs. Women know that no prick is harder than that of, for instance, 19 year old Adam's, the hero of this excellent tale. A boy like Adam has the stamina, the youthful exuberance, the fat hard cock, and the heavily loaded balls to delight any mother. An added thrill is that Adam's dad is desperate to see his boy fuck his own mother. That's a decent father, not in the least jealous, and more than willing to share his wife's cunt with his young son. If more dads were so open-minded, treating the mother's twat like communal property for the family males, old and young, to unload their balls up into, the world would be a much happier place. Father and son sharing their experiences of having their pricks up mom's cunt, joking about it, watching each other cream mom's wonderful hole, egging each other on--true family bonding!

A good mom/son story. The second chapter had the same problems as the first, spelling/grammar and descriptive phrases. For the spelling/grammar, look at the end of the chapter as an example. It should have read "Adam was too!" not "Adam was to!" Get an editor!

This is how your going to let this story end ? That's just PITIFUL you need to add another chapter, you can't just let it hang like this. Finish it and then I'll give it a rating.

Your story is very erotic. I wonder if the there is more to this situation?

like others have said this story needs work.

And still no mention of birth control or may be your setting your son up to get you pregnant.

This story needs to be continued.......................

Great story. 5 Stars. I wonder now what will happen. The mom asks her son who is only 19 if he can picture himself fucking her forever. Interesting thought. She is 45 so when Adam is 40, she will be 65. Will he still be fucking her? Will he meet a girl at college and she will not be OK with Adam fucking his mother? These stories are exciting and full of lust but when one starts to contemplate the afterwards, the fantasy loses some of it's luster. Where will the husband be in this arrangement? He fulfilled his fantasy of his wife fucking a younger man but now the wife wants to fuck that younger man, their son, forever. Now what happens going forward? Does she fuck her son regularly at home? In front of her husband? Does she prefer her son's cock to her husbands cock? In the greek legend, Oedipus kills his father and marries his mother. The phrase "Be careful what you wish for" comes to mind here. Now that the Pandora's box of mom and son having sex together is open, it can never be closed. This is why sex between mother and son is a fun fantasy but the reality of this situation can be very dicey

LOL kind of funny, Gatlinburg is a bout 15 miles from me...

It was good.

I like it and wish there were more parts to the series

I liked this story because husband and wife agreed on what they wanted and got it without destroying the family. It is a shame that no one ever informed or asked the son how he felt psychoogically about the situation. Although he knew the father approved of the wife and him going on their trip, he never discussed the matter with his father. He apparently does not know his father is in favor of the relationship.