All Comments on 'Steamed'

could have been longer after the guys left.

Thanx for this story. Hope you have more to submit.

Nice story - would like to read part 2.

Well written. Great build up. Very hot.

I liked it for what it is, an erotic piece of fiction. Found it an enjoyable read.

Excellent short story

...short, descriptive, vividly portrayed, somewhat erotic and believable.

Thanks...

...got any more ideas for good stories?

Rape? What idiot can read this and think it's rape. It is clearly SEDUCTION -- and it was mutually satisfying -- to ALL involved. Great story! Write more.

PS. If a reader did not like this story, why read it? It was obvious what the content was going to be!

The category "Loving Wives" is about married women having sex with other men, with or without their husband's approval. Period. This well-written, sensuous story was clearly WITH the husband's approval. They don't need yours. Good job, magic stranger.

Liked the way it was written - BUT - I could NOT resist if a woman mouthed to me:- ''Help Me''

I realise he set her up,still it goes against the grain - for me.

Beautiful set up. Very erotic. Hubby & "Lana" were pleased. My only question...were you "Lana?"

... she leaves him. Any man who would do this to his wife is not a good man. A husband protects his wife, he does not set her up to be fucked by other men for his amusement.

Hopefully she got everything in the divorce.

I loved the story. I did not feel that he "set her up", he did however let it happen. Then again, so did she. What was to stop her from leaving on her own?

Please write more!

That was Rape and a Woman wrote this ???

What the fuck kind of loser does that? He's supposed to protect her and instead he allows her to be raped? She needs to divorce his ass and leave him homeless and then when the other homeless guys are fucking him up the ass and he begs the cops to help him, they can just smile and say "No."

this was such a turn on. i like the premise and want to see more like this

Very erotic, arousing and well-written.

More please!

This has to be one of the better stories I've seen in a while

That was pretty hot. You should continue.

Too short,but how it occured was conpletely believable..

🖕

I liked the bit where shes mouthing "help me"

Very hot scenario that could of easily been a true story and for me thats what i look for..

This deserves follow up chapters!

Very erotic and well written!

A very uncomplicated read and believable also. I thought the ending was too abrupt however it did not stop me from liking it and wanting more, please?

This is a superb story, beautifully told and very arousing! Please write more....

Very Hot! Excellent read. Thank you. I was hoping it would continue, but it was very satisfying. Great read.

Wow! This is a great piece of writing. I love the way they just flowed into the situation. One thing, leading to another, until... Please write again.

Written for sluts and their weak and demented little cucks. Awful

I enjoyed this story. Got me hard.

Great story... Yes the ending was a bit abrupt, but the story had a sense of realism.Hot!

What a wanker the husband was.

liked it a lot,

Excellent! Very believable build-up, amazingly erotic, highly arousing and well-written.

I love it!

Please do a sequel or another story, as erotic as this one!

Extremely hot…Especially liked her growing irritation with him for saying no…Would so love to watch my wife preferably after we argued about something…then to watch her climax repeatedly…and I obediently clean everyone up..hot sex after arguing is the best..

Wonderful story. Do you have any thoughts about making this fantasy reality?