All Comments on 'My Sister and My Niece - The Beginning'

I presume you are from the intrroduction.....

There are always long gaps between your stories. This is clearly the first part of a potentially long series (I will be very disappointed if it isn't) so please don't keep us waiting for the next installment.

Please continue - it's not polite to leave me here all turned on like this! :)

Please continue this. Thank you.

till Chapt 2... lizzie.. have always loved that name

Enjoyed the part of the story that has been written, I hope there are more chapters to follow... I am waiting with bated breath...

Dan, Sarah & Elizabeth; I've seen these names so many times in your stories that I'm wondering if I should be logically connecting the characters. I don't think so; but it is a bit confusing. Obviously the My Sister & Niece stories are linked; but I'm talking about the others.

In this case it sounds as though Dan is a Thrill Seeker who wants to try anything and everything without regard to anyone else. If he wanted a 3-way; why not try it with his family? Of course; we're supposed to dislike him!

To tell you the truth it's hard to judge 1 pagers; I'll read the set and tie em together.

Thx;

DKP

You have a great story started, just waiting for the ending, or even another chapter or two before the ending.