All Comments on 'coffee shop stop'

A little long for my tastes but enjoyable.

you got a five. Agree with Vr. Some lite and enjoyable. Some is just me amusing myself

my cock is hard

a piece of lumber,

what knotty pine? See I told you, me amusing myself. Would be much better chopping out the cliches. People don't like me much, when I have to resort to amusing myself. See Rant #3/ she got a 5, this time.

.....witty and quirky and you actually rhyme! (too few poets do).

Lovely, thank you!