All Comments on 'Big Butt Daughter!'

I wish I had someone to love me like this :(

The story was very hot but it made me sad and depressed, I wish my fat ass could male a man love me and be sweet to me....sighs

5/5 great story keep up the good work.

This story made me very hard and had me wishing for a nice big round ass to play with...I had to go take a cool shower and let my imagination run wild...

Thanks for the excellent story!

A really superb and well written story as always from this writer. Loved It!

Wow, what a story that was. It took me quite a time to calm down after reading that one. You are a superb writer.

That was hot!!!!!! (Great Read) Thanks.

you show your the best. Almost came from reading alone.

That was a great story that I enjoyed immensely. Only wished I was getting all the sex Lily was getting from her father. You had me wet and playing with my clit and then shoving my vibrator in for exra pleasure.

More stories like this please!

Barbara

Wow thats all i have to say damn verry well written

just wow great time and setting

Please write a second part to this story. It was very good.

Please write more. More of her big beautiful ass in public and about how she wantonly gets preg.

I am now officially a fan! I will definitely be checking out more of your stories. I loved the element of tenderness and emotion you weaved throughout the plot. Thank you for taking a controversial topic and turning it into a beautiful story.

Thank you very much for a very good story.

This story was written very well i look forward to part 2.

NOW THIS IS THE KIND OF STORY I CAN RELATE TO I LOVE IT I WOULD LOVE TO SEE A SECOND (2NT) CHAPTER AND MORE ABOUT BIG BUTT GIRLS YOU DON'T READ TO MANY STORYS OF BIG GIRLS MOST OF THEM MODEL TYPE OR AS YOU SEE THEM,I LIKE THIS BOTH MOM AND DAUGHTER ARE BIG,.THE ONLY PART IS WHEN YOU STARTED RUNNING OFF ABOUT CINDY(WIFE) THAT GOT CONFUSING

TRY TO BE CAREFUL NEXT TIME ALL IN ALL ONE GREAT STORY EAZY TO READ

AND GREAD ENDING SO FAR.................................."R"............................................

I wish i had more time to explain just how much i love this story! After lunch as i need a break! More to cum i hope!

Cheers

Newtype

Now that i have relaxed a bit and got some lunch i can drag this out! I love this story! You were excellent in your characters and the way you painted them really pulled mi in. I love the wife and feel so sad she wasn't there for the final act! In fact that was my only other complaint besides how short the story felt. More please! Or maybe consider a parallel story where the father struggles againts his desires and those of his wife and daughter. It also reminds me of a similar story where the wife/mother is playing both sides of his conscience. While in the middle of fucking she warns her husband not to touch his hot sexy young and horny young daughter'shot body or else! Meanwhile coaching her daughter on how to push her father's sexual buttons! More like this please! You have the technology! You can rebuild it! ;-)

Cheers!

Newtype

I sure hope there is Part 2

poor grammar...lifeless characters....lame dialogue....no sexual tension....why have this copyrighted?

I just wish it was longer. Great story.

I read to the middle of page 2 ..

What does this have to be? ... What a shit!

That was HOOOOOOOOOOOOOT I would LOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE to see more stories of those two!

i wanted to like it. i wanted to find it hot and nasty, but the story and dialogue were just so stiff and awkward that i couldn't even enjoy the title of the story, let alone the actual story.

L. A. Walker I'm a fan...you make me hot and horny...and I've cum multiple times after reading your stories. DON'T pay any attention to some of these readers. I think some people lack imagination.

I feel like in the beginning of the story, you have the daughter and father already wanting to fuck each-other's brains out. That would be fine if it were just a bit shorter, like maybe one page long. But you don't really have much character development happening throughout the whole story, and that kind of makes it a bit boring. A suggestion might be that you could perhaps have the characters take their time realizing their mutual lust for one another, or have them fuck from the beginning and slowly realize that their relationship is much more than just physical, maybe some true love going on.

I am amazed at how many people liked this story. I found it lacking in so many respects. Unbelievable character actions and dialogue. No story, just a scattered thought spread across three pages. I guess everyone has a reading and writing level, and this story seems to found it's target audience. Thankfully, there's a lot of stories to read to get this taste out of my mouth.

It was so good.

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"I wonder if she thinks the same shit about me and is dying to fuck. Wouldn't that be crazy, but if anyone found out, it could get pretty nasty and I'm not up for that."

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Rofl. Im not up for that? Lol. Umm, as opposed to everything else you two do in the house, cause THATS normal daddy daughter stuff, right??

Ok. Really now, what's with... all the constant... dot pauses everywhere? They're like... getting really... annoying.

Anyways, if you set that one annoyance aside, the rest of the story was a lot of fun! How they held out so long without one or the other of them sneaking in the others room at night and jumping their bones is beyond me, hehe! Sure surprised she didnt sneak in his room to 'cuddle' and accidentally slip something in ;)

Thanks for the story!!

Love chunky, soft, big butt women. They are the most sexual. Please write chapter 2!

Excellent story. Dad's urges are catching up w/him. A big "thick" assed red headed daughter stalks him, a promise she made her dying mother and it was only a matter of time. I love THICK WOMEN and red heads are always a plus. Got a '5" from me on this one. Packed w/desire, lust and anticipation

Loved your story..Would love to hear from you😅😅😅

A sex session that lasted 4 days is more in the realm of fantasy than fiction.

That was SO Hot!

Very, very Hawt!

11/10 White Panties!!!!!

Nothing better than fucking your step daughter in the pussy and butt pussy. Keep on fucking

A story oozing sex. Loved it.