All Comments on 'Enhanced Interrogation Ch. 02'

Where's Chapter One??

I appreciate the slow build-up of tension and the alternating perspective; keeps things interesting without having to go straight to sex right away. Also, the writing itself is solid, a little shaky in places, but I'm feeling it. I look forward to more.

you had him remover her heels and the next paragraph you commented how hard it was for her to walk with a spreader bar and heels both on.

JN

When will you add the next segment to the story?????????

Well. Doesn't THIS look awfully familiar.

greysequoia has posted the first and third and you are supposed to be doing the even numbered chapters, but there's been nothing since March. What's going on?