All Comments on 'Life Springs Eternal'

Wow I aspire to be a writer this kind of things inspires me

Beautifully done

thank you so much, your post was extremely thoughtful, I am humbled by it. :)

Beautiful!!

Thank you so much for your comment dear, it is most appreciated :)

You have a way with words although I felt this to be more of a long poem then a story but just the same good luck in the contest.

for your comment, so much. It isn't hard to get caught up in prose unfortunately. Might have been the classical music I was listening to when I was writing this. *laughs* :)

A very nice and very sweet first effort. A bit too heavy on the adjectives and similes, but the context does call for that style of prose. I can see the classical music in it, and had a bit of the sense of the Pastoral Symphony/Centaur piece from Disney's Fantasia. Keep up the good work.

I actually had that piece of music from "Fantasia" in mind when I wrote this, I see it came through. *laughs*

What a refreshing change it is to read a SciFi thing, and so well written.

Each phrase well-turned and descriptive.

Well Done

for your kind comments, I appreciate it very much.

I really liked the way it mostly felt like a female solo story, yet at the same time she didn't feel like she was all alone.

I thought this was a well written tribute to not only nature itself, but also to the beautiful, natural journey of the female orgasm.

Thank you for your lovely comment, it is very much appreciated. I have a close friend that has always said, "Women might not have testicles, but we got the best orgasms." ;)

A lyrical and pleasurable way to honor Mother Earth and birth life anew. Beautiful! Goodluck :)

~Luna

Thank you so much for your lovely comment, which in it's own way, was lyrical too. :)