by dawoolef
Proofread your stuff, man. You had numerous sentences like this one: long,dark,flat hair
I enjoyed your story & I can't wait to read the next chapter. Forget the grammar police, not everyone is a stickler for grammar.
It's cool we'll wait, just pass the time like you have been doing, and you'll always have an audience.
Got me hooked.
To meet Aunt Aimee and see what the threesome find to do for relaxation. She sure must be their favorite auntie.
Yes, not everyone is a stickler for grammar: brain dead piece of shit assholes.
place before I can't handle it any more. Keep writing and ignore anonymous critics.