All Comments on 'Visiting Aunt Aimee Ch. 02'

by dawoolef

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
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Proofread your stuff, man. You had numerous sentences like this one: long,dark,flat hair

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Wonderful story.

I enjoyed your story & I can't wait to read the next chapter. Forget the grammar police, not everyone is a stickler for grammar.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftabout 13 years ago
I guess they'll get to aunt Amies place soon

It's cool we'll wait, just pass the time like you have been doing, and you'll always have an audience.

Got me hooked.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
I can't wait

To meet Aunt Aimee and see what the threesome find to do for relaxation. She sure must be their favorite auntie.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
re: Wonderful story.

Yes, not everyone is a stickler for grammar: brain dead piece of shit assholes.

papagrizpapagrizabout 13 years ago
LET'S GET TO AUNTIES

place before I can't handle it any more. Keep writing and ignore anonymous critics.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
more!!!!

I gotta see how this unfolds!

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