All Comments on 'It's Okay'

YOU MUST HATE MALENESS.....A man would take the risk of being beaten or shot.

what kind of guy's do you think would like this in real life. I'd rather be beaten and then press charges.

Please do NOT write anymore. GO suck a cock!

vile.

Die you nasty twisted mother fucker.

Please god rape this little turd of author

It sucks

OK, up to the end.....why in the world let it be "OK"! She was a cheater and they raped him, and your conclusion was that was "okay". Geeze, what a let down.

Good story! Boy, sweet Ruth turned out to be a real raunch, didn't she? Anyway, don't listen to the bad comments. Your story was well written and I like the way hubbie finally settles in.

The worst story I have read in a long time. *

RAPE

another writer who is a sissy.

Holy fucking christ. What's wrong with the author that you would right this shit? Get therapy, because you're pretty fucked up.

Well he after he calls the police has them arrested for rape he'll have his revenge on this

The guy should become a guy and take them down. He will never recover and the wife/friend will never respect him. He is no longer her husband and will soon become a girl.

Go nuclear and do it now!!!

Rape is rape. Although this could be a nonconsent story, us straight guys would appreciate it if u put your homosexual fantasies in the gay area where they belong. The comments so far would confirm my opinion.

Sorry, but a real man would have done something about this. There would be two dead people at the end of the night.

How would anyone find this in any possible way erotic or interesting. The only people who will enjoy this story are GAY fucked up sissy boys. Anyone else should pass this story by.

Extremely well written. The other commentators seem unable to distinguish between the message and the messenger - they aren't able/willing to read carefully.

The narrator is raped - because that's what it was - at gunpoint by a physically stronger man. And apparently the other commentators have never heard of the Stockholm syndrome, of which this is an example.

The other commentators don't remember Patty Hearst - kidnapped and raped - and within a few months brainwashed into becoming the lover and bank robbing accomplice of the men who kidnapped and raped her.

Stovkholm syndrom my ass!!!!! If that whore and my so calledpulled that shit on me - they would both be dead. I would cut his cock off and shove it up his asshole wiht a bal bat. Then I would turn to loving wife and slowly start peeling the skin off of her body just like you would do to a deer you were cleaning to eat. I would contiue the torture for as long as I could just so she would know the pian she had brought me and how digusting she was as a human being. I may go to jail but the two asshole would nevercheat on anyoneelse again

wrong category!

To never write again and to eat shit (obviously it's in your diet) and die slowly and painfully

As another commenter said, it is powerfully written. It was exceedingly distasteful and disturbing for me, but that doesn't take away from the excellent storytelling, and that's what we read for.

Bullshit! A sick fuck wrote this.

Boy did this story stir up the nest! Not my cup of tea, but I have certainly read worse written stories.

This defective must be related to wantswhiteboys or that idiot shoe.

is that WOW is too stupid to be a literary critic. If this is good writing, WOW has ball bearings rolling around inside his skull.

This should have been in gay section. Then you might receive a decent rating. But your story line is so bad. That someone will have to write a ending for your story because you did not. Good luck on future stories although you should find another site. Oh!!! is this a auto-biography.

When a sick male writer into male humiliation exhibits his predilection for self disrespect that is what turns readers off no matter how well written.<P>

It is the subject not how talented the writer is.<P>

Get some help sick writer.

If this was a story where a female forced another female into submission no-one would blink twice. But yet all stories that involve any male on male have to be in the gay section? Get a grip... just because male/male isn't something YOU enjoy doesn't mean you have to show how pathetic you are in your inability to deal with how some people DO enjoy it.

By the way... this story is a written expression of a sexual FANTASY, not something the writer thinks would actually happen in reality, you fucking morons. Women who get raped don't end up enjoying it either.

Anyway... male/male isn't something I normally go for but I quite enjoyed this story. Bit of a soft ending but good overall.

Kwasia oooo kwasia!

Now they have sneeked into loving wifes. It seems that we heterosexuals are being pushed out!

are you ready to take your own life? I bet you are. This story is just sad and pathetic testimony to your own to your own mental health issues and your own ridiculous life. You wrote a story that included EVERYTHING un-healthy and sick and NOTHING sexy, erotic or healthy. You're simply a loser.

...get a grip. It's about something you don't like. The internet is full of stuff like that. That's why you have a back button. Use it.

Cyanlot: This kind of 'resigned consent' story is difficult to pull off, no matter what the mix of genders is. You did it really well. I hope you write more. Ignore the haters.

Stop writing--if that what you call it--and get help.

It's not the writer who is pathetic but all these people who cannot handle GAY SEX OMGGG. If you disliked this story so much why did you read it right to the end? Did the urge to leave a negative comment come from your own sexuality being confronted,perhaps? Get over it for christs sake.

I did not expect that, what a wimp!

I once talked with a college teacher about student evaluations she had received. She said that she prefers that everyone likes her classes. But, she said, when they don't, she takes some consolation in the fact that those who liked the course were articulate, thoughtful, and insightful while those who didn't like the course were, though clearly displeased, were completely inarticulate and sometimes barely comprehensible.

It's too bad that some people found this story so disturbing and threatening. But, when I compare the expressive powers of those who liked it with those who hated it, I have to conclude, "It's Okay!"

Cyanlot

autobiography

story of the author his life

I love how dumb some of the commenters are... when the writer is INTO forced gay sex, do you really think that some inane comment saying this is an autobiography will actually insult him? hahaha retards.

I'm not into rape scenarios, myself, but I find it interesting and powerfully written.

...to have to perpetrate than those who don't like your stupid story are inferior to those that like it.(And your "professor" should be fired for denying valid criticism.)-Without an iota of premise for his "transformation" the story is nothing but a gay man's fantasy with little rational tension and absolutely zero meaning.

I can't believe all these people are freaking out. I mean rape is ok but gay rape...OMGWTF! Sounds like some people are having a little trouble handling their insecurities.

Wimp

Go back to your fucking gutter and stay there

do not listen to these dumb fucks who are browsing the NC/R category then find one that involves two males. ignorant neanderthals. I have not posted any stories on the site yet, but to have authors that have a bunch stories all ranked 3.0 or below, to criticize someone's skill?

no one cares about your opinion if all you say is "eww you're a queer!", or "you should kill yourself!" Shows how uneducated and pathetic some people are. Great story and keep up the writing!

I don't understand all the hate, you delivered what was desired, gay forced sex... anyone who reads this and comments negatively shouldnt be reading stories in this category. It was a very erotic story, well done :)

Sheeze! Do you swaggering homophobic gasbag critics even understand the concept of fantasy?

Cyanlot: keep writing things like this. You have a great creative talent that stretches the imagination.

evidence was in his asshole, call the police get tested and get both of them in jail, simple

This story actually encouraged me to ask my boyfriend if I can fuck him in the ass lol

This story planted the seed

Anyway,

for all those guys who are calling the author (not sure if your a guy or girl haven't checked your profile) a sick fuck:

This is called: NON CONSENT/ RELUCTANCE

In real life, no rape is no funny, but this is fantasy. So in all reality, it makes YOU sick fucks for coming on here to read about women being raped.

If you approve of a woman being raped in fantasy, then a MAN can be raped in fantasy.

If you don't like it, well that's just too damn bad.

End of story.

Anyway, keep writing

That was seriously hot and well written. Not sure about the other posters, I just hope this was wrongly categorized for a while and they feel shame for getting off on it.

Guess it's too much to ask for a guy that isn't a 2-D, emotionless drone.

Divorce the bitch as soon as you can. Just get up and leave when shes asleep. File the divorce-and make sure the other spouse knows also. That'll teach both bastards.

The wimp should have picked up the gun right after servicing his "Wife". Shoot the bastard. Then call the police. "I just got raped by my wife's lover, so I shot him". The evidence is already overwhelming. DNA and tie ropes. Let her explain what happened.

Or better yet, while "Cleaning" Darrin, he should have grabbed his nuts and crushed them while biting his penis off. Ouch!!!

No self respecting man would have put up with this shit.

Ya think I'm in the "Burn the bitch crowd?"

Rather than agree

and too chicken shit to retaliate. TK U MLJ LV NV

And then a couple of weeks later, kill both the assholes.

He says he hates his back stabbing best friend, but when being forced to clean Darrin up why didn't he just reach up and crush his balls? Everyone in this story is an oozing fistula. Why does our writer "Cylut" want to create the perfect humiliation story? Is this a new type of bad humor?

Wait. Plan. A divorce and revenge. No way the husband lets his wife's betrayal stand!

Bullshit! Total and utter BULLSHIT!

I kinda liked you're story.

Totally unbelievable crap that you would think he would be okay with being anally raped and forced to suck a man's cock. Even for a fictional story. He had all the evidence he needed to send them to jail for a VERY long time. Her fingerprints are on the gun, Darrin's semen is in his abused ass. A simple trip to the hospital and a phone call to the police and they're in prison. No self-respecting man with even a shred of pride would do anything less. At the most a man would plot to kill them, painfully. What a crock of shit that you ended this story with his acceptance of being raped. This is one story that makes me wish I could write worth a damn. I'd write a sequel without your permission and I guarantee you that Ruth and Darrin would not walk away scott free.

When I was first coming to grips with my desire to be penetrated, this is the sort of fantasy that I would have to get over the idea of getting fucked. I could only get to the point of penetration if it was against my will. They were some of my strongest fantasies.

I'm sorry, but I didn't like it. I'm a woman, but I hate to see a woman humiliate a man in such a manner. It would be one thing if he wanted to do it himself, but to be forced to do it by her and the man she has been cheating with...

I don't like "real" rape stories(the subject was really raped and not just playing hard to get) but I think I could have liked it if there was actual "reluctance" and it happened just been between the men, but I feel like she had already humiliated him enough by sleeping with his best friend...and in their bed!

I have to agree with some of the other commenters. If this had been a woman being set up for rape by the husband and his best friend or husband and his lover, these cavemen would have been telling you how hot this story was. After all this is in the correct category. They came here looking for rape...just not involving two men.

Any straight man would kill the both of them, you are a real slime ball.

posting garbage like this... what a sad statement for the gay community that so many of their people are mentally disturbed.

I've read several of your stories now, and I have to say that your ability to vary your subject matter to the extent that I've felt I was reading different authors is no small feat! The structure and scenarios that you create are always imaginative and interesting. I hope that you continue to entertain us with more fantasies in the very near future.

Are you kidding me?!!

Even if it meant the death penalty, both of these two mother fuckers would either be dead very shortly, (on the same day), or they'd be in jail with the husband suing both of them for pain and suffering.

This shit is fucked up!

I'm a woman & I loved the idea of the woman being in control. It's so easy to have the man be the dominant, but to give it to the woman is unique & sexy.

My wife's ex-lover conquered me in a similar way. He still demands servicing from time to time now, although they don't see each other any longer. Its a humiliation and control thing, he knows he is alpha male and enjoys keeping me in my place.

No one, not even under these circumstances, rolls over for something like rape. They may give up the fight for the moment when defeated. But in the long run? He's going to get dressed and go to the hospital. The hospital did a rape kit and called the Police. Darrin's DNA, the drugs in his system, his wife's fingerprints on the gun (the Police searched the house) sends his soon to be ex-wife and Darrin to jail for years and years. Rape, sodomy, illegal restraint, illegal drugs and assault and battery guarantee they spent at least 15 years in jail. Your ending, even for fiction, was ridiculous and unbelievable. Complete and utter drivel and not worth the time spent reading it.

Excellent story of cuckold husband accepting his place. And that is just the first night of training for cuckold. Soon he will be locked in chastity so he not jerking off and always horny. His balls getting blue as he drips and leaks his goo in the panties he now wears for underpants. He will suck and swallow and clean his wife's stretched pussy and ass. And his wife will see to it that hubby is introduced to the glory holes, sucking off strangers and letting strangers fuck and breed his pussy through the hole. As the wife and lover supervise. And wife will start loaning cuckold out to hung she males who will also use him for a small fee. Cuckold will be very happy in his new life.

UNO ESTRELLA, EUNUCO CABRON

It's rape pure and simple and his wife and boyfriend are going to jail - IF they make it that far. Many men would simply get a gun and put them in a deep graver where they belong. Relax my ass. ANd if Darrin was stupid enough to put his cock in his mouth, he would have bitten it off. Lets see the cocksucker rape anyone else with no dick. In any case wifey gets the crap beaten out of her. Terrible story of violence, rape and abuse.

you will never stop the LW cuck stories because there are to many people who like them. But don't worry they all hate you!!!! Gave it a 5

Several people have commented that if the victim of the rape were a woman there would be nothing to comment on – standard porn with a non-consent edge. We know that most rapes happen within marriages and most go unreported. People – women and men - acclimatise to the violence and live on hoping to avoid it in the future. Horrible but true. This is what this story tells. The fact that a man can enjoy being fucked in the arse is pretty uncontroversial too. Cyanlot is also a far better writer than most people on this site. The story actually looked at the conflict in the situation and had some tension in it. A brilliant story and very erotic.

what person gets off on this shit if this happened to me they would they would of found them both with a bullet in there head

To the anonymous poster and asked this question, the answer is: obviously not someone who cannot spell, punctuate, or write a coherent sentence.

After 3 paragraphs it was too bad to finish.

to offset the asshole of LIT's 1 vote!!

You have to be the worst of the worst perverted fuck on the planet!!!!

to offset the asshole of LIT's 1 vote

My wife and I had been swapping with our friends when one night she wanted a 3 some. MMF my best friend joined us after I watched them fuck as I lay beside her she asked me to eat her. I am crazy for oral so without thinking I went down on her, while I was eating her he came up behind me and spread my cheeks and before I could stop him he was in me. At first I was so embarrassed but soon I was actually moaning. My wife crawled out from under my face and held my hand as he fucked me. She did like this wife and cooed to me and talked to me like I was girl. Before the night was over I sucked his cock . We had many MMF after that with most of the guys in the sub division. She would have ffm but I never got to go with any of the other women once they knew their husbands had fucked me. They treated me as if I was a wife also.

and just had to come back and say how mean you anonymous people are. Have you ever tried giving yourself to a man. It is the most wonderful thing in the world, feeling a man in you. Knowing you are the reason he will be climaxing.

I'd love to have my wife do that to me. She already knows I want to watch her with guys but tells me she is too shy. I dream of my wife having a bf or bf's. And she has me suck them with her. Has them fuck me . I'd love to chat with others like myself or women who like guys like me. I'm on yahoo using the same name or kerry8866@hotmail.com.

Boy I can tell you're a real man aren't you ? Now your just a gay cuckold. don't write any more stories maybe just hang yourself.

You have to be the worl lowest faggot!!! Maybe you are gay and that is your way to keep on with your lechery!!! Maybe you are only an idiot who needs mental help!! I don`t know what is worse!!!

Two thoughts:

1) Your story was erotic to me, and

2) Those who commented otherwise and verbally tried to belittle you ...

Why'd you read the story if it didn't interest you from the start? Sounds like

y'all are in serious denial. Maybe you should shut your mouths until you're ready

to put want your really want into it...

This is a fictional piece I presume. It came from the Author's imagination. We all read it to the end for some reason. Erotic literature is just flat compelling. I have read and considered so many of the comments, good and otherwise, and really don't get too upset about it. The Writer has an imagination!

Another piece of shit...

It was not at all okay. The both need to be hurt,badly

Only pervert shit written by a pubescent teen or an ugly old bag!!! Maybe you are a pervert gay!!!!

HE HAD THE POWER TO STOP THIS RAPE ONCE HE HAD HIS DICK IN HIS MOUTH BITE DOWN HARD AND NOT LET GO

This is called "rape". This is then called "Jail time after a trip to the hospital and a rape kits been applied". This is then suing the rapist for everything he is worth. This is having the wife arrested and going to jail as an accessory.

If I read a really hot story, I always look at the list of other stories by the Author. Sometimes, if I read a really lame story, I do the same check. This Author is a big ZERO and I was not surprised to see the majority of his stories were in the Gay Male category. Only a queer can fuck up a married couple plus wife's lover story. This Author should avoid trying to write anything else and go find a glory hole.

Man, the hostile remarks here. Geez guys, get a life. So maybe it should be in Gay but it was definitely Non Consent. Give the author a break. Most of his stories are in Gay just so you sissies in hiding don't get upset. You probably sneak over to the Gay section most of the time anyway.

Good work Cyanlot. Fun story.

This, is not a revenge story. This is a bi-cuck story

Hey, guys. About this being in "non-consent", instead of in gay male or other category

Literotica kinds of shift your stories around, disregarding the category you put it in first place. I don't know why, but it happens.

Maybe someone who read it in the original category (gay male?) reported it to Literotica as being in fact non/consent (what kind it is).

Anyway, that story could be also in category "Loving Wives" or "Fetish", where you can find tons of cuckold reluctant bi stories like this one.

Categories is not that much specific. That's why I usually check the tags before reading a story.

This story sucks. It needs to be relocated to cuck/bi-male.

Even its a fantasy it shows how low your brain works!!!

Is there really a readership for this? I kept hoping he would get the opportunity to get the loaded gun and shooting Darrin's dick off and ramming it into his wife's cunt and emptying it there. Don't worry about me reading any more of your shitty stories. My last stop at your cesspool.

He should report it to the police, and if nothing happens, wreak some vengeance on them both. I like hot stories of reluctant men turned, but THIS IS NOT ONE OF THEM!

So yes, this is a story about rape, in all of its forms, both physically and emotionally. You have here one sad bastard, getting betrayed by the two closest persons in his life, in the most heinous way imaginable. No way did either one of those people ever loved him in any significant way - the initial betrayal was bad enough... but this? This prove that neither Ruth or Darrin are actually human.

... Or does it?

'Cause, let's be frank here, given the way the unnamed husband eventually became a willing participant to his ordeal, his wife and/or his best friend most have known, in some way, how much in the closest he must have been. I mean, we've all watched "Oz", haven't we? So we're all in agreement that, if someone jackass tried to prove to the cheating slut we had the misfortune to marry that you are a little cuck boy by raping you, then ask, at gunpoint, to suck his dick full of shit... Sure, you accept to do so, but, the second jackass is losing it and the slut pay more attention to the blowjob that to the gun she has, you then TAKE A BIT OUT OF CRIME, if youknowhatimsayin, right? So, the fact that the MC here didn't bite his nemesis' dick off, and didn't knocked out his stunned wife immediately afterward, to get back his self-respect, and instead submit to his tormentors... it made it pretty clear he was gay all along. By the way, same goes with Darrin - fucking a man to prove dominance is basically prison mentally, but, when you're outside? Yeah, you're gay. Or, at the very least, extremely bi. Which makes you wonder about Ruth, in all of that - what happened if Darrin and her husband keep having those mind-blowing orgasms together, without her being involved at all? They hang out together, drink beer together, watch sport together, now fuck together... who's become the third wheel there? Great vengeance, lady - you set yourself up to lose BOTH of the guys you were fucking! Genius plan...

Anyway... for what it was, this story was quite repulsive. LIT suggests it with one of the LW stories I read recently. I wasn't expecting the MC's complete abdication to his faith, which seriously made me want to vomit - that, him giving himself away like a true pussy, was the most revolting thing about this story, way more so than even the gay sex, which, sorry, I'm simply not into (not that there's anything wrong with it...) I should have took the time to summarily check Cyanlot's other efforts, which would have told me pretty much what I should expect here. But I didn't. And I definitely paid the price for it. At least, I now learned my lesson... 👎🏾