All Comments on 'Old Major'

A sweet little sexy story. Good luck in the contest.

Nice story. I like the imagination. Good Luck.

Oh those tricksy pixies! Somehow, I don't think the girls were too disappointed that they didn't heed wise elder advice. I hope the wide world of men can, um, measure up to her expectations. ;)*giggles* This was a fun little first story. Goodluck!

~Luna

Thank you all so much for your comments! Its very nice to hear these things about my (indeed) first try!

A very grateful elf :)