All Comments on 'Mother and Daughter are Trained'

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sexisbeautifulsexisbeautifulover 12 years agoAuthor
I guess Nobody likes to comment.

28,000 views and no comments. ~ a tear~ I don't know whether my work is appreciated or just like all the rest. Oh well, at least I have one person who Favorited it. We writers love feedback, good or bad.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great

Great story, write more please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
needs more detail

i love the story line but there isn;t enough detail

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
choose a new title and characters then rewrite this incredibly sensual and

sexy story. It kept my nipples hard and pussy flowing as I read it but it never seemed real. You have a tremendous talent....... You can write a series of stories in this genre and be a winner........

Good luck and will be looking for your new works......

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