All Comments on 'A Night Out'

More Please!!!

If that's your first, it's a lovely start..... I think I will just have to read more

...you enjoy what you write! Love of subject matter shines through. This is only the third of your stories I've read. A suggestion for a writing exercise: try a third person point of view. Converting this story to third person might be fun. It's more than just changing all instances of I to she and making sure the verbs agree. You have a different point of view. What to leave in, what to leave out, as the song says, and the story is DIFFERENT. But the same.

As most men, truly enjoy a girl-girl story. This one so realistic and sensual! thank you!

I like a few more details and lots more seduction , but I loved it all the same.

Greatly enjoyed this "quickie". ;-)

nothing like two girls finding some pleasure...I like this a lot!