All Comments on 'Auntie Takes A Huge Cock'

Spell check, learn punctuation. Get a fucking editor or proof reader.

"My hobby/obsession, is bodybuilding and the results show on my 6'3 frame. This along with being blessed with a cock that would make a horse cry,"

At least make it somewhat believable (to start with anyway).

Start off by Landing in a space craft and put this story in Sci-Fi & Fantasy!

Mark

and not believable in the least. I need at least a little story behind it, instead of "my aunt came by the house, said she heard I had a big cock, and so we fucked."

Please get an editor

This applies to everyone who wants to submit a story. Trying to read past the poor grammar and syntax makes it difficult to appreciate the merits of the story.

i gave up after the first sentence and from the other comments i wish you had too.please give up now

Not a bad story, but I suggest getting someone to double check your writing before submission. Spelling mistakes will take people out of the story.

Story line has great potential, use Spell Check, editor wouldn't hurt, keep writing!!!

WTF is a "bit of a funny turn"?

USE THEM

It was a really good story but a little to rushed and next time please use spell check.

I didnt even see the first story coming to an early end never mind that there was not another chapter!

Me want!

You mean he does not fuck his mother also? You left a lot out the story is not finished Lt needs 2 or 3 more chapters. Its like running off a cliff not a good ending

Ron. Texas

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continue..an auntie is prego

NOT PREGO i see alot of comments on them getting prego after thats just dumb nobody WANTS to have retarded babies

But now mom cant keep the image of her boys cock from creeping into her thoughts

Alright whoever wrote this clearly didn't proof read before submitting because it sounds like chunk from the goonies wrote this story. "Hey you guys" don't read this story it will give you a headache instead of a boner

That's what I say get his aunt pregnant and even his mom. This way the aex stays in the family

It was a great story. My two favorite story types are sex between Aunt and Nephew...and Mom sharing son with her sister (or friend or neighbor or coworker or daughter). I also enjoy Mom giving Son a Sex Education or getting from Son what her husband no longer gives her. Everyone writes about Mom having fun with others in front of son, but I'd like to read about Mom (and sister or daughter) having sex with son to establish his reputation.

Certainly hoping to see more chapters.

Hope you knocked your aunt then took your mom knocked her up too

I remember taking my aunt Rachel got her knocked up she already had 6 kids i gave #7 we still fuck alot go on vacations to we at nudist resort both nude saw 6 black guys fucking married woman in front of her husband yelling at them fuck her cunt ass mouth good in hard they finished unloading inside her husband called his wife slut then saw us especially my aunt her chest was 40 double e one look jugs on her my aunt looked at me I looked them come get fuck shit out of her told them make sure 2 largest go in her cunt in her ass sametimeone down her throatshe yelled me bastard I said for that fuck her bareback she is ovlating get her pregnant three days later she was carrying black kid in her she end up having twins that were black all takes is only black guys she hooked on real large black cock then she moved out moved in group black guys they use herè

This might pass if you, as an author, were only thirteen years old… Spelling, punctuation and grammar are all part of what make or break the flow of a story.

Use some believable material and you’ll end up going a lot further.

Too many basic spelling & grammar mistakes to make the story enjoyable......!! A bit (?) of proof reading beforehand would have worked wonders.

The lack of punctuation and quotes makes it unreadable. Spelling and grammar were problems also though. Would be enjoyable if you would repost it with proper spelling, grammar and punctuation.

I'm a 7 foot 8 inch tall bodybuilder with a 19 and 7/8 inch long cock that's 9 inches across and my mom that has 46DDDDD tits loves to deep throat me too! That's if I have the time, in between looking at myself in the mirror at the gym, or fucking 10 women at a time, while 7000 other women queue around the block, waiting for their turn. Life is good 😊.

Not very believable Main character, same old boring concept, needs proofreading badly and probably some editing.

Hilarious. Do school all over again lol

I would assume English is not your first language or you skipped school a lot