All Comments on 'Seducing Her Daddy'

Amazing writing and great storyline ;)

I hope this is, to use a phrase from gourmet restaurants, the "teaser" that comes before the main meal...

Fantastic, and hopefully you have more to come yet! Thank YOU

Well written and engaging, with a nice build up to a very erotic conclusion.

Holy shit that was hot.

Any chance part 2 could have Shelby in lingerie, stocking, high heels for Daddy?

It's "herself", not "her self." Of course, the mindless zombies won't mind. In fact, they'll say I'm nit-picking and they'll also ask, "Where's your stories?"

Thanks guys for the comments. Sorry about the "her self" :) I can't honestly say that I'm terribly upset I made one spelling error, but I guess some people are. I write for fun, so hopefully some of you enjoyed it.

That is so exciting! Daddy and Daughter masturbating for each other, and then Daughter eating Daddy's Cum! Wow, it doesn't get any hotter than that. Except, of cousre, when you have them fuck. A Daddy Cock in a Daughter Cunt is the absolute best sex, Congratulations Lilli.

This is very similar to the way I started having sex with my Daddy. We love fucking each other!

Don't get too upset over the "her self", "herself" conflict. Things happen. However, Mister/Miss Anonymous is the epitome of lazy because this is his/her constant comment: "It's "xxx", not "xxxx." Of course, the mindless zombies won't mind. In fact, they'll say I'm nit-picking and they'll also ask, "Where's your stories?" " It doesn't take long to find more of these comments for other stories.

I swear he/she has this saved so it can just be cut and pasted into the comment spot and then fill in the offending words. So it seems that commentator is not only lazy but also has a one track mind.

Keep on writing and don't let the dweebs bother you. Hot story!

dezurtdawg

so fucking hot 8P

I loved it Lilli

I am sitting in my office with the hardest boner. OMG that was so erotic.

Good job. Phk the typos. I loved it.

THat Was yummy

i read this hot story and masturbated three times,pretending she was me. im stacy18_bi@hotmail.com and i want my dad too

i really liked this story!! waiting for the next installment!!!!

I wish I was your daddy Stacy.

lkove this very hot horny story. reading this was awesome love it cant wait to read the next part of this very exciting erotic hot horny story. do hope you have lots more parts of this brilliant story.

This was one hell of an erotic starting point, and I sure hope to read more of your stories. Keep up the awesome work!!

Really enjoyed this first chapte. Now on to chapter two!

Really sweet, well-written and amazing. Thank you...

Hot and sooo sexy!