more please, little longer, definitely gave me a hard on, but story was over before i could do anything with it
and SO NASTY!
I have been listening to stories here for maybe 10 years. Not only have I never heard a better submission, I have never commented on any story in all that time. Yours was the first to move me to do so. More and longer, please! This little story already made me come SO damn hard... thank you.
I've ever before wanted to hear more from an author in an audio submission. I want to know the background, more of the circumstances, even the aftereffects. It's a shame that you must remain anonymous although I can hear the confusion and wonder in your confessional.
That was such a great story. It made my breath quicken! And your telling of it was perfect. I hate to be so greedy, but I would love to hear more from you!
Very nicely read, well written, great pacing. Good imagery. Very very nice.
just amazing, i love hearing/reading about public humiliation this story got my panties sooooo wet. Would love to hear more.
Very erotic..the tone in your voice..holding back the tears..your description..you have created positive tension with this fan..
I love the juxtaposition of tears of shame and tears of joy. Well done.
As others have said, beautifully read with the right expression and feeling. I love the use of the word 'cunt' instead of that stupid American word 'pussy'.
it was expertly writin! well done, would like to see more
I loved this. Her voice is perfect and the picture she paints of walking down the street with his cum running down her face is so very vivid. I long for the same experience one day. Joanne x
This is one of the very best !
I understand the confusion , shame and excitement. Loved it. Thank you.
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