by innyuendo
I'm glad to see you have started to write again, it's been too long. Can't wait to read the next part or two.
Really fast paced and erotic.
I'll be watching for chapter 2
It was really visceral. Well put together, as well, it didn't fall into a lot of the lame traps that other Incest/Taboo stories do. It could have used a little bit more reasoning as to why his mom would jump on him like that. Oh well.
You have GOT to write more of this, and soon! White hot and loved the dirty talk. I would love to see son and bang her at the same time.... Yowsa.
Just read that at work and will have to go to the bathroom and relieve myself. Hot or what!!
Please write more of that gorgeous incest-story
Beautiful. Picked up, for me when Mom hadn't showered yet. Beautiful, natural, primal. Will proceed to Part 2 now.
But take the extra time to proof it before posting. Keep up the good work!
Great HOT story. Yes, we want you to write more chapters. Hopefully, Mother and Son will keep trying new things. Thank you.
Fantastic story!
I am still hard and looking forward to the next chapter
Thanks
Joe
That was hot! I love stories that get to the action hard and fast!
Can't wait to read the next chapter
It's funny how is always 7 or 8 inches cock in the game!What about 5 or six?!
It is a very basic sex story . Instead of mother if he had used the word Aunt the story would have been much interesting . May be try your luck next time.
He was doggy styling for all of about 2 seconds and then he pushed her out of the hot tub? How is that even possible and why do that?
Also... If he pushes her out of the hut tub your muscles tighten up... that's the end of their sex drive right there....
its just a story but com'on man
Even the nay-Sayers read up to the very end, so your story was successful. A lot of these guys are just looking for 'jack-off' material, that's all they care about, losers! No appreciation for the efforts of the author. It's just a story for Pete's sake, get a life!
That's the way all boys feel when they're finally face to face with their own mother's cunt. A boy has a very special feeling about his mother's cunt. It's his own birth canal, of course, so it's always magical to him. When he sniffs that sharp musky scent wafting from his mother's cunt to his nostrils, he inhales deep into his lungs, loving his mother's cunt-smell. Everything about his mother's mommy-hole, the same hole he came out of, delights him and makes him tingle all over his body. Being within breathing distance of his mother's twat makes a boy harder than he's ever been in his life, he's wild with lust. First, like Peter in this fine story, he worships his mother's mommy-twat with his lips and tongue, giving his mom a great cum. (He's boyishly proud of that.) Then he brings his big hard cock to the place he entered the world from, slides it inside, and fucks his mother like there's no tomorrow. Finally, the boy gives a loud grunt and unloads his hot young balls, shooting his mom full of all his warm creamy semen. It's the best, most sincere gift a son can ever give his beloved mother, and that a loving mom can ever receive from her darling baby boy. Like Peter, he'll be doing that a lot from now on.
to a completely different home/mother/lifestyle/ . . .
I can only imagine how good this story would have been with more buildup.
Think about it, some times a BIG cock can hurt the story, and also hurt mom. Keep going you have a good story on your hands, done let a BIG cock kill it. ......Thanks