All Comments on 'She's Daddy's Girl Now'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Where is YOUR story

Mr. Anonymous... Where is your story? Nobody forced you to read this very entertaining story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
It could be a really hot story if...

...it wasn't so rushed and a little more thought was put into it. You had really good idea but you need to take your time, reread it, pay attention to the flow of the story, and edit when necessary.

Again, really hot idea, almost cum worthy just avoid "Peter Griffin's Laws of Erotica" and you'll do fine next time. ;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Family fetish fun.

Reads as light hearted incest/fetish story, fast paced.Does what it says on the tin!

hornychick617hornychick617over 12 years ago
Very hot story

Hot read.

JohnnyMaxJohnnyMaxover 11 years ago
Spelling !

short sharp story but work on your spelling THEIR not THIER

angelmist324angelmist324over 11 years ago

This story was amazing, ignore what others said about it cause I loved it !! :P

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