by BiPNWguy
A very good start and I am looking forward to future instalments.
That was some hot start to a story, but i wish you had done chapter 2 straight away.
Dont stop now! More chapters are needed, you have a hot story
Well written. Easy to read. Very hot and erotic. Get out chapter 2 very soon.
Except I am waiting for part and adding you to my fave authors.
Like the way you've slowly built the story. Eagerly awaiting future installments. Keep up the great work.
You are one lucky bastard.
Please continue.
Excellent start to this story, it's got all the right ingredients to turn out a cracker! Can't wait 'till he bones his slut mother.
Please tell us all of the story! This can't be all that the two of you did. I also had an affair with my mother and would like to know how yours turned out!
The characters in the story seemed to be very believable and a good foundation for the rest of the story.
I do hope that his mother teaches him how to give oral sex, and lets him practice on her, along with showing him how to use his cock.
Lots more could be told and I hope to see more soon.
Your first submission is wonderful. I love the immdediate tenderness conveyed between mother and son. You obviously have more to share about this wonderful time in your life and I cannot wait to continue with this story. I am always in the mood for a good romance!
What a great start to a potentially wonderful story. More chapters needed to fullfil that potential. You tell the story very well and I wait with anticipation for the next installments.
Welcome, and thanks to you to write this mother son story. always keep writing this kind of mom son story. and one thing is you could write some mom vs son wrestle story where the mother and son wrestle each other so brutally. you write a passage in this story about they wrestle each other sometimes so you should write a story about a middle age strong mom wrestle with her teenage son and mom win against son by submission hold. mother son wrestling story is so erotic as mom son sex.
For a short story, the backgrond/history of mother/son actions were logically constructed and beautifully presented. The honest love between mother and son was presented without shame, loathing, self-doubt, self-recrimination nor guilt on anyone's part. The son is beyond lucky that he had a mother who would discuss anything with him without directional obstruction (both were free to talk/discuss without parental/positional power play.