All Comments on 'First Date'

by dgharis

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Karl_BorthKarl_Borthalmost 13 years ago
Great story

Everything you wrote was excellently done. I would like to see more body to the story in the future though. Too much happened too quickly.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
The tape

Or we'll see who goes to jail.

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