All Comments on 'Tingles'

want more pls keep writing

This is incrediblee!! LOVED it!!! i want more!! :D

Dont leave us hanging!

Switching between first and third person was confusing, and there were a couple of sentences that didn't make sense.

Try using the grammar check in your word processor before you post; it helps catch mistakes.

However, the story was very good - intriguing and sexy. Please keep writing!

Great work, I could feel your thoughts flowing on to the page as I read this.

A little editing and you really have something here!

great erotic writing and build up yummy

Loved the first-person start to this but was thrown a little by the switch to third-person, That said though, this was am amazingly erotic read. I cannot wait to read the next parts X