All Comments on 'Meeting Ch. 01'

A wonderful recounting of a novice sub's first real-life encounter with her on-line Dom, told with flawless grace and precision. The brief encounter's given special poignancy by the the woman's doubts about her age and desirability, and it's lovely to see her reservations burnt away by the heat of the passion. My only cavil is that the tale stops short of showing us more, and I do hope the author will continue her tale into wilder and more extreme directions.

But then, I'm kind of prejudiced. I like stories about predatory Doctors.

Th above comment should have been signed with my name--Dr. Mabeuse. Lit is screwing with me again!

There's just something about the thought of a chiropractor. The musculature of such a doctor, the way he knows the human body, the way he can manipulate the limbs and lines to the snap of painful pleasure. Mmmmm, Evan Moran.

This is my first visit here - first time leaving a comment. But I have to support your efforts and tell you that I hope April Greer and Evan Moran have a long, satisfying relationship together - I hope there are more meetings for you to share with us. You have an excellent voice and talent to be shared.

I loved the way your words flowed. It seemed to be an account of a real happening and it was totally believable. Keep up the good work. stevesprivatebox@hushmail.com. I would love to visit with you more.

The title says it all....

great start and very similar to my own experiences as well as fantasies... leaves me wanting to read on.. nicely done

I was so impressed with how you told this story, it was erotic and sexy, yet ( i want to say) dignified. i'm a 50yr. old single parent and my 15yr old daughter thinks i'm to old for sexual relationships. this is the kind of story that makes me think that maybe she's just a bit wrong.

thanks for the great, uplifting story and i hope to hear more about these two!