All Comments on 'Nude Housework Challenge'

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sphilsphilabout 13 years ago
Good Start

It should be interesting to see where you go with this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Nice story

I certainly hope for a second installment. I can see this getting more interesting when she returns the play pen.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
good story

It was a great story, however i would have liked to see a little more nervousness and emotion from both characters, but overall i liked it. Please keep on writing the story.

max052max052about 13 years ago
Good job!

Great stand alone story, but yes, it would be great if you added to it. Thanks for a good read.

max052

fieryimagination100fieryimagination100almost 13 years ago
Loved it

Please continue the story. I really wanna watch this lovely relationship unfold.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
loved it baby

love to be in your shoes baby. i love it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Well written. A delightful interlude in life.

I hope she stayed a little longer when she brought the playpen back.

Anonymous
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