All Comments on 'A Nerd's Tale'

please follow up on this one, seems there should be more to follow.

This was one of your first stories, so pretty good! I write sort of like you, I get an idea and I write down so I don't lose it. Try to write like that, then revise it. Linger on the details and the descriptions, and give yourself some time to think if you like your story as it is or if there's something you need to tweak. This process helps a lot. You could be brilliant, you know.

Loved the story. It reminds me of some of my writing in High School.

so I will be sending quibbles via the "Send Feedback" link. I don't quibble anyone I don't think has talent. You do. This story was sweet and hot, the kind I like, and I think others will like it too. Keep writing!

love for nerds! finally :)