All Comments on 'Isabella and Zoe's First Time'

by lbelle

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Great start.

Loved your story & I can't wait to read the next part.

2275jr2275jralmost 13 years ago
sucking on her wet pussy to a hard cumming.

brilliant story isabella and zoe's first time.

love it awesome writing. how there going to be a lot more parts,

# to this very ho horny story do love lesbian stories.

KathyFKathyFalmost 13 years ago
First Time

Making Love w/ Another Girl The First Time is So Wonderful.

Learning Her Taste & What Really Pleasures Her The Most.

I Hope You Continue w/ More About Your Love w/ Zoe

Kisses

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Write it in first person if it's mostly true.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Hi lbelle, __ Your story, is well written.

I do wish you had continued this story, I would have liked, to have read more about, Isabella and Zoe.

I think your story could have had a little more background, but for as short as it was, Well Done!

It's just too bad you'll never know if you could have become a writer!!!

Gay Kat.

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