All Comments on 'Cry Little Sister Ch. 03'

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GimletEdgeGimletEdgealmost 13 years ago
You've got to love a good hockey romance!

So far this one's all systems go. I'm looking forward to the next period.

GE

hodunkhodunkalmost 13 years ago
Very Interesting!

so far so good, next chapter please. I can't wait to see the next development.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Woman!!

Your story was a bright light in he middle of my insomnia. I was practically squealing when I saw it. Then you trampled my heart by ending it so quickly ;-). Definitely enjoying the twist, but please do not torture us for too long!

cantfightfatecantfightfatealmost 13 years ago
I held my breath

at about 4 different points in the story, wondering if they were going to find out who the other really is. The suspense is killing me. But it's got to come out eventually. He'll see that she's still in town, she'll come to a game or a game event.

I'm excited for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
5 stars

I cried cried & cried...thank's to u & socallcynic...it's awesome

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Thisbis such a good story with them being so close but not really seeing who the other is yet. Please dont wait another week for the next chapter.

Dkhanson01

apollonaapollonaalmost 13 years ago
Nice!

Dunno the first thing about hockey, it's practically unknown in this part of the world. But then again, as long as you're writing it, I'll be reading it. The excitement you show in your characters make your stories a delightful read. Thank you author for your efforts.

mtoldman33mtoldman33almost 13 years ago
Morning Delight

Well written. A grabber. Keep the chapters coming.

Please?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Moving Day

Didn't Casey in a previous chapter mention Rory helping them move furniture in! I LOVE this story. Excellent writing but it needs to continue. Hopefully we don't have a horribly long wait for chapter 4.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
loving it so far

fucking love this....need more pleaseeeee!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Hurry up with the next installments! please.

LoneStarRiderLoneStarRideralmost 13 years ago
Confession by a Not-a-Hocky Fan

(Sorry about that part.) Nonetheless, this is being a great story. With that chapter ending, though, your readers really need to see Ch.04 as quickly as you can throw it together.

iamsuziamsuzalmost 13 years ago
Another great chapter!

I can't wait for chapter 4, hope you'll be able to post it soon after the way this 1 ended!

LillithArchivistLillithArchivistalmost 13 years ago
More please!!!

I wasn't a hockey fan until I started reading MugsyB and PennLady's stories, and now I have another writer to feed the frenzy!! Thanks for that! ;-)

And I agree with the others - another installment ASAP.

xoxo-Lily

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Such a tease. This series is wonderful. More soon, please.

jg2291jg2291almost 13 years ago
thankyouthankyouu

Jesus christ, you're killing me here! I am so fucking in love with this series, I can't even put it into words!

You sure do have a way with words; keep it coming!!

WistfulSeniorWistfulSenioralmost 13 years ago
Wonderful Writing

You have a wonderful way with your story telling. Please, don't leave us on the hook for long. Next chapter, please!

SplendidSpunkSplendidSpunkalmost 13 years ago
Hmmmmm

Woman seem to have this thing about teasing - and you are teasing us, you can admit it. Still all and all I love the way your story is developing, its romantic and sexy yet not all wet and sticky. Keep it up I love the tease too! - Kevin

ambush184ambush184almost 13 years ago
You Bum!!!

Don't you dare leave it here. This is really getting good. I like the story...keep it going.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Hurry Up!

Stop having a life and get to writing!

KarensClit1990KarensClit1990over 5 years ago
Great humour

Had me chuckling

dgfergiedgfergiealmost 4 years ago
Poor Rory, playin the field and falls in love

I love the story and the leadup to them meeting each other again in front of her brotherbut I figured it be at a party or family get together. Keep writin.

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