All Comments on 'Ogres and Ogresses Ch. 01'

good start

Love how developed you made the story in the beginning. It makes one fall into the story from the start. off to the next chater.

I love chapter one on to chapter two

Not to nitpick (but that's what I'm doing), but gold doesn't rust. Just throwing that out there. That's as far into this story as I am, but you already used 'whom' correctly so I have high hopes. Love me some english majors.

DON'T BOTHER READING IF THERE ARE STILL ONLY 34 CHAPTERS. THE STORY IS UNFINISHED.

I've always liked tribal stories like this, and especially female characters like Zyra. Not everyone is down for sex at the drop of a hat and some people bloom later than others. Despite this being a site for erotica I appreciate the genuine reluctance, not just the token protest in a lot of noncon/reluctance stories.

(P.S. I also really appreciate Zyra and Kyzu being women of color as well as the general diversity in the tribes. Some stories are kind of homogeneous.)