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My Sister And My Niece - A Plan

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by Anonymous04/30/11

nice

nice story, i wonder what her age was, sis should of gotten involved as well

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by Anonymous04/30/11

So sweet and hot.

I loved it. Please write more.

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by Anonymous04/30/11

I think......

I think you just might be able to get the whole family into this and make everybody happy. Great way to start a story and can't wait for the next one'!*
You got a "5" on this one.
Thx. JAG

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by Anonymous04/30/11

Awesome!

I love the whole 69, finger in her arse thing. Does she have a sister that can be introduced into the story after you write the one with her mother?
Next time can you spend a bit more time on the intro though?
I did give you 5 stars though, cause I love the idea of this story. I'll be adding this one to my favourites.

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by rock675201/14/12

Do tell more

There must be more to this story. I can't imagine that sometime after her arrival, that Sarah doesn't end up in bed with her brother and possibly even her daughter also. Please share the next chapter.

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by kuro199002/21/12

please...

Finish the story it was great so far!!!!!

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by Anonymous03/06/12

Awesome story series!!!

All four parts have been great. You left us hanging at the end of part four. The story does need to go on. What will happen between Ron and Sarah and between Ron and Lizzie? Please tell us more.

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by FinnGriswold07/30/13

I know its been a while but will you continue please?

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by Anonymous08/07/13

Continue plz!

Plz? Do continue, at least 1more ch.? 3of dem happily 2gether 4ever?

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by Anonymous01/04/14

OK; completed the 4 parts, now realize that it's not complete yet, Grrrrr

Why was Ron going to make breakfast when they've been up for hours and it should be afternoon?

Not sure if Elizabeth is the catalyst to get Ron & Sarah together forever, or just to fix things, then she'd end up with Ron. Maybe of course a happy lil family for three 8~)

Did Sarah have an accident on the way there?

Please continue;
DKP

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by Anonymous04/14/14

Confused

Title suggests that it's a sister and niece. Yet the way the story reads it's a mother and daughter.

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