by Hisbelle
You have a beautiful voice for story-telling. This is hot and romantic and I hope there will be more.
I agree with the previous poster- you do have a very natural way of story telling. The nervous energy of the characters and the passionate love between the two was simply delightful. Thank you. Please do write more.
... previous comment of 'hot and romantic'. Two of my favorite things and definitely a 5 when put together like you have.