All Comments on 'Nightshade becomes Nightslut'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
I urge you

Truely enjoyed you story,Please continue.Ideas for ch,2 Nightslut submitting too arch nemesis/ begging for lifetime of continous humiliation.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Wicked imagination!

This is an excellent story that badly needs editing by someone with a good command of English. I'd love to read additional chapters; so please, find an editor, and keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Are you allowed on here if you are under 16

That as got to be written by a child no way is that a adult the way it’s written scream 13 at most lol

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