by SweetMaj
The key thing for me is that the emotion is clear in your poetry.
Style in poerty is important, but I believe that emotion is more important.
I'm not a big reader of poems, probably because I can't write them but this one I could feel.
I liked it, I really did. It seemed so heartfelt and I could feel the emotion.
with respect
DG
your poem about you husband is expressive of the strong bond you enjoy between each other , well done and keep it up