All Comments on 'Page's Training Ch. 10'

I have read your whole series, and it is definitely the best I have ever read. Please Keep writing!!!

please carry on with this story as it would be a real crime if you stopped writing as these stories of ''Page''

The series has been great. Don't let it end yet. And if you do pull the plug (pardon the pun) start a new line as soon as you can. This has been some of the best on literotica in a long time

Please continue. what Bobby did was HOTT! should happen to ther again - lugging her and making her drink the cum. He deserved that reward. I don't like nick - he lerts her fuck anything and everything but not his own cock. he better have a good reason for why stacy is allowed on his dick and not page. poor page, it feels like he'll never fuck her. stupid nick.

This is a fantastic story keep writing hopefully another series simlar

The drinking part.

(Yeah, I know a few--very few--stuff like this.)

Which makes it "artistic" and, therefore, cool.

(As heroine was for the beats.)

"swallowing load after load of seed"

http://www.backofthecerealbox.com/2012/05/girl-likes-lozenges-can-you-blame-her.html

But I don't understand the aniseed reference--yeah, I know about anise drinks an al that, but is it the "seed" part? Not the anise. Just because you say "seed"?

Right. Who here fuckin cares about Serge Gainsbourg and France Gall?

Sum nerd. Yeah. SOME (GIRL) NERD.

(I shouldn't feel the need to say this, but--ah'm not into the--)

It's weird and lovely and romantic and perverted.

It also seems sort of like a movie I'm watching--an older Italian movie--a classic art film--

sort of beautiful

maybe i'm just--smokin balkan sobranies (in my dreams)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TTAvNkiml9k

the above link: Darjeeling Limited soundtrack--"Where Do You Go To My Lovely" (Peter Sarstedt)

"he shoved my head into the carpet"

"a short, flowy skirt and a pink gauze button-up blouse" --

Wait--the first quote, although violently romantic, gives me paws. DO NOT FUCKIN DAMAGE A GIRL'S FACE. GIRLS QUITE OFTEN WANT TO BE PRETTY. FOR GUYS. YOU JERKS. DON'T DAMAGE THE MERCHANDISE. SHE WANTS TO HAVE OTHER GUYS THAN YOU WHEN--IF YOU'RE LUCKY--YOU ARE A MEMORY.

Ok. Second quote--just pretty and sorta like ballet-class clothes. Very pretty.

pretty and (not too) violent are lovely

I'm disappointed. But it's ok.

But it's so feminine--

writers can do anything--sex/gender change? No big deal. Also--free and no surgery required!

"What would I have thought of someone who swallowed cum like it was a precious gift? I laughed. I would have been disgusted."

I would have been afraid someone else would have found ME disgusting.

Or subservient.

I don't know (ha) that I was so interested in this in real life. But in fantasy, I was.

And, yes, I know Freud was right about an oral phase. And that behind all this penis and semen stuff is your mother's milk-filled breast.

So when you suck a dick, you're a little girl again. Innocent.

Or not?

I like being a little girl.

into pearls--

and i trust him

one time when i was writing "erotic poetry" and i told my husband to do this so's i could write about it. No, i "didn't swallow it all." His instructions (from me) were to "cum sum in ma mouth, an the rest on my face."

Then ah was gonna write a pome about it.

Which ah proceeded ta do--

ah'm proud

that no male ah know

would find what ah rote

above

"erotic"

sigh--

trash writing is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

soothing

like milk in ma mouth

Look at what happens--just for instance--in India. The acid thrown in her face.

Which is all she has to be sold to a rapist.

I can never be attracted to men.

would never do these cruel things.

That's why he's my hero.

I have fun writing this bullshit!

I just love it, love, love, love, love, it! Making up this nutcase stuff!

Total nonsense--

On insane asylums--why did the entrance to the one my mother was in look like a face? Mostly the mouth part? Grotesque. Like a pitiful open mouth?

See Alexander tech. for voice--relax your lower jaw. Do singing exercises.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nmZqb2VVc48--"Good Morning Starshine"--from new version of "Hair"--"the earth says 'hello'"

It--this youtube video--says from the movie "Hair." I never knew of it before I just found this on youtube--

when you copy and paste something and send the thing and it's not the RIGHT THING. How does this happen?

Anyway, if anyone's interested, they can find this song.

"Good morning, starshine" from "Hair"--

angst is sooooooooooooooooooooooo boring

which seemed--exotic--all those pagan signs and images--

I felt deprived--then--now I just feel glad--

I love being female, and I think black people and other people who aren't white males also love who we are--

so many groups of people to be fair to--

an you so little and nothin--

but really, you can already see the political divisions between certain groups--

What a cruel "joke."

Then I hacked my wrists. Over and over and over.

If this was "feminine power," I would use my "feminine power" to take my life.

At least, that was some kind of real power.

I hated Nick. He would kill himself too if this was "masculine power."

But people don't care what they write here.

"People" don't write here.

Some of the things I've recently read that she said seem to relate to this story.

She said about men, "I'm on my knees for them."

What did she mean by this? I've no idea.

She said, "It's geisha to be sure."

She said (this is a poem by pkovey): I've always wanted to be like my mother and Charlotte (her half sister)--

only women who understand women's primal attachments to other women can possibly understand her statements--

oh--sorry about that sexism--

published in --

"pearls inside" sounds so innocent--

but it's NOT

other women--

will never be good mother or wives--

" What would I have thought of someone who swallowed cum like it was a precious gift? I laughed."

Not into it.

You might as well say she liked to suck the wax out of his ears.

I mean, a fetish is a fetish.

With your personal fetish--well, you're on your own here.

I mean, some people like brains and eggs. Or so I've heard. (A lot of them, I think, are French. At least I read this in a French cookbook.)