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All Comments on 'Halloween Costume'

by storyteller_no_9

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Mmmmm

Thank you that was hot.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftalmost 13 years ago
Very hot

I like these small interactions that you write.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Got the job done

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
This was hot

This got me hot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Hooters needs more like her

I don't think I will ever go to Hooters again without thinking about this story. I probably will get hot just looking and thinking about doing things that happened in the story..

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
you left a shit load out, like detail

the writing technique needs a lot of work

commentary?

how about setting, detail, actions ...paint the picture instead of them just talking, this may have worked for some but it won't sell anything

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Total Load of Fucking Crap

Stick it up your fucking ass hole

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