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e.e.cummings and goings

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by Anonymous

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by Maria239405/08/11

I think

this is one of your best, my opinion....

~ maria

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by butters05/08/11

like your use of space

... it works like punctuation for me. stage directions from behind the curtain

my single, minor quibble lies with "but then I'd have not walked". my eyes/tongue trip on this each time, reading it more naturally as 'but then I'd not have walked'

i even enjoyed the final comma.

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by Lady Clarissa09/05/11

oooh very clever........

....you've even made this lady drop her capitals!

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