All Comments on 'e.e.cummings and goings'

this is one of your best, my opinion....

~ maria

... it works like punctuation for me. stage directions from behind the curtain

my single, minor quibble lies with "but then I'd have not walked". my eyes/tongue trip on this each time, reading it more naturally as 'but then I'd not have walked'

i even enjoyed the final comma.

....you've even made this lady drop her capitals!