All Comments on 'I Can Feel You'

by NzWiccan

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KathyFKathyFalmost 13 years ago
Wow, What A Story ! !

This Very Uniquely Sexcitng. I Would Of

Caved In To Have Sex While In The Kitchen.

I Quess I Have No Will Power

But This Is Quite a Story. Thank You

QuantumanQuantumanover 12 years ago
Terrific story, narative and dialogue.

Try and stay in the past tense during the narrative portions. You're very taleneted.

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Hey... well I am on here because I love to read the stories that are written here. I'm trying to write a little myself now and I've gotten some nice comments so thanks to you people :-) Though some of you think all of these I wrote for myself, that is not the case, and some o...