All Comments on 'You Will Be Mine..Again Ch. 02'

by Myanlass

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
YAY!!

So Glad to see you Finally Updated. Can't wait for more :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Thought you have forgotten about the story. But it's worth the wait!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
5 points & hurray u made it :))

StormtrecStormtrecalmost 13 years ago
Wonderful

This is a wonderful story. I love where things are going, especially after the break up. Please let us know what the new story (from the 4/23/11 request) is going to be. Let us, help you get everything out!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Patrick is weak!!!!!

I don't care wat the excuse he had for leaving gale the way he did, he was a coward and chose 2 walk away. Speaking from some experience, when someone leaves the way he did ther's no way in hell you'll be able 2 trust him again. Lust maybe, but not trust. And if gale falls 4 him again then she probably deserved 2 be screwed over majorely

honeybreehoneybreealmost 13 years ago
Yay an update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I kind of agree with the previous comment that Patrick better have one hell of an excuse for leaving the way he did Gale, not some lame one. Because to hurt someone like that and to say the words he said shouldn't be easily forgivable not even in a story....lol. So hopefully he grovels A LOT! But I am liking Gale more and more

kelleigh0127kelleigh0127almost 13 years ago
When will Ch. 3 be out?

Okie so need more than a one pager because this is getting just too good.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
I have an idea of...

what happened. My guess it has something to do with the parents and not getting something, like being left out of the will or disowned if he actually married Gale. I could be wrong but that's the only reason that I can think of that would be strong enough for him to do that.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Was Gale Pregnant???

Was Gale pregnant when Patrick left her....there are some clues of her maybe carring a baby...like when she whispered 'what about our family?' or putting a hand on her stomach...I think that she may have miscarried due to her heartbreak...WHAT A JERK!!!! IF THIS IS TRUE AND I AM ON THE RIGH TRACK.

SouthernPassion53SouthernPassion53almost 13 years ago
Nice open ending

you left the ending hanging nicely. I'll look forward to the next installament.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Yay!!!!!!

Feels a bit rush; her story should develop more.

LakergirlLakergirlalmost 13 years ago
Nice to see the update

Thanks for the update and hope to see more. I'm not reading as much as before but glad to find the update.

TechRaiderTechRaideralmost 13 years ago
still good story

i like the way your going with this story. i still want her to hit him then make him explain himself. but that feeling is going away slowly. lol. good luck and may beautiful sunrises and sunsets always be on your horizon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Thanks Myanlass

For updating. I wasn't giving up on you!!!

NightpleasureNightpleasurealmost 13 years ago

Really like wher e this story is going and i cannot wait to wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Thankyou

I've been constantly checking for an update on this story and I hate to say it but I feel slightly disappointed. It feels too rushed instead of James telling her that Patrick may have been forced I wish she found out herself due to a heated argument between the two. You are very talented and please dont make us wait too long for the next update!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
great!

First, i like that you kept this series going. All those stories has been great. I just love the characters. It was loving serious and sooo funny, {Nik-'I think I'm sick}. That was soo funny to me. I like that Gale got a different prospective from her brother-in-law. A lot of people jump to conclusions without seeing the other side.

Tierra22Tierra22almost 13 years ago
next

It was a good chapter and i look forward to the next installment.

NightpleasureNightpleasurealmost 13 years ago

Please please send in another chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
more

i neeeeeeeeeeeeeed more. update soooon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Great story I'm really liking it. Please update again soon

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Amazing

I cant wait for the next chapeter and I love the character mara, she is hilarious and I love how James and jade are still apart of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
2 months.....

2 months.....

kuroukiphoenyxkuroukiphoenyxover 12 years ago
did anything happen with you?

Don't worry about apologizing... life happens.

Remember we will always be there supporting you...

Namaste

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Okay...

Seeing as my name *is* Gail...do you not think to actually pick a spelling of it?

Last chapter was Gale, this one...Gail and by the looks of it, in the next few chapters Gayle...

It's fucking annoying. GET AN EDITOR!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Thta Patrick guy is a coward...

And it is not a "guy" thing: I con't believe anybody forced him to do something, he CHOSE to do it. He had a choice, and he made it. So no, even though Gale was my least favourite character in the series, the way she behaved towards Jade was so awful, even she dones'nt deserved that. I know she is going to end up with him and forget him, and that the "explanation" of his behaviour will be one to redeem him, but I really don't feell it. Whatever happened for him to leave her like that, he was weak and a coward.

AMHJ89AMHJ89over 10 years ago

Bet jade and James was getting busy..beast with two backs

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